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Re: Any good books read lately?
Interview with the Vampire by Anne Rice. *sigh* It was amazing.
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: Just a quick question
It depends on your definition of punk music. ^_^ What bands do you consider heavy or punk? If this is because of the diary entry you posted, I think people ...
Jan 16, 2009 -
Re: Death Note Parody
Lol. This is pretty funny, actually. I think you should title it "Death Note Parody" instead. I was expecting some serious story where Light creates his Utopia or something ^_^ ...
Jan 16, 2009 -
Re: a futuristicaly themed computerized drawing
Hey, Voxina. Wow, for paint this is pretty good. Whenever I draw on paint it looks like... not so nice. I'll stick to my pencils and paper ^_^. Critique: -Why ...
Jan 16, 2009 -
Re: Report a good member!
Haruno Sakura- amazing stories, really good critiques. Awwww. Thank ye kindly, Rosey. ^_^ I tattle on... -Rosey Unicorn for her awesome critiques and pink font. -Lost_in_dreamland for loving classics
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: Teaser..... it may seem a bit strange
Okay, here's the second part of the review you wanted! An expression that i couldn't make out flickered across the thing's face. i should be capitalized. Also, don't tell me ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: Guardian Angel (I will change title later)
Hey! Here as requested! I don't want to repeat what everyone already said, but it is kind of confusing how you put the "when/what..." information at the top. Major, major ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: Who's That Girl?
Hey, Hermione! Welcome to YWS. I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ My critique is in bold. It had been several years since she had seen her twin ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: Redemption Chapter 1
Hey, The Fire in Me! My critique is in bold. Chapter 1 “I wish I were a whale.” I straightened up my back in pride because I had just made ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: I Hate Emoticons
Hey, Fire of Dawn! Well, I personally love emoticons, but I'll review this anyway! Their cheerul cheerful color and exaggerated expressions Personal opinion here: If their expressions weren't exaggera
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: Teaser..... it may seem a bit strange
Hey, Kenni! First of all, I just wanted to tell you that before you psot your work here on YWS, you should have two reviews of other's work. Thanks! Onto ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: Why So Serious?
Hey, Tabithalillian! It's definitely not bad. It has a lot of potential. The main problem here is the shape of his head. It's too rectangular and lumpy. His nose is ...
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: insert coin
The machine is broken. It stole your money! Ha ha! *inserts coin*
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: Pictures 2
You have so many cats! My parents say two are already too many. :D 1.) Very nice. The cat is so cute. 2.) I like the cat, but yeah, the ...
Jan 12, 2009 -
Re: Twilight Poster WIP
I am an anti-Twilight person, but I really like this (as a piece of art lol) On Edward: -The shading is excellent -His hairline looks too far back... maybe it's ...
Jan 12, 2009
